VIOLA’s IRIS

May 13, 2008

my sense of you

Filed under: Veotry — by Vee @ 11:27 am

by vee

 

i am intrigued by the infinity of sound

it’s where our inner selves are found

where our true spirits abound

it’s the things you say that i refuse to hear

the things i say that you ignore

it the things about us others hear

that make us fear

 

i am  tickled by the silkiness of skin

it’s when we can really say what’s within

where we can indulge in every sin

it’s the way you touch me that i enjoy

the way i touch you that you love

it the way others see us brush

that makes us blush

 

i am  intoxicated by the subtleness of smell

it’s how I know you oh so well

but you know i don’t kiss & tell

it’s the way you inhale & i exhale

it’s the way i inhale & you exhale

the way others sense us rhyme

that makes us live sublime

 

i am fascinated by the fullness of flavor

it’s something i love to savor

it’s what many desire never to waiver

it’s the way you crave & i satisfy you

the way that i crave, &  you satisfy me

it’s the way we don’t crave at all

that makes us want to brawl

 

i am amazed by the clarity of light

it’s here our dreams are never far from sight

where within ourselves we often fight

it’s the things you see in me that i don’t

the things i see in you that you don’t

the things we see in each other that others don’t see

that makes us just want to be

4 Comments »

  1. fantastic poem why do you say you bombed on this one?

    Comment by alkemi — June 17, 2008 @ 7:50 am

  2. alkemi - thanks for the comment. i love the poem but i think i bombed on the performance. or maybe cause i’ve never performed something so personal at the time it’s raw.

    Comment by Vee — June 17, 2008 @ 8:44 am

  3. The most beautiful thing that ever come from soul to paper!

    Comment by Grace — August 30, 2008 @ 10:24 am

  4. Thanks Grace. Means a lot.

    Comment by Vee — September 1, 2008 @ 7:08 am

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